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tisdag 4 oktober 2011

A date at Mc Donalds

Daniel and Ben are identical twins. Daniel called a girl and asked her for a date at mc donalds.
What the girl didn't know is that it wasn't Daniel who came to mc donalds. it was Ben. Ben and the girl met and everything went well. They ordered their food and sat down at a table. They started to talk and the girl said that he sounds different. Ben said that he had a cold and the girl beleived him but when Ben Started to eat the girl saw her scar on his chin. She directly understood it was Ben and she got very upset.
The next day Ben and Daniel explained it was just a joke and the girl laughed.

3 kommentarer:

  1. Good word knowledge. Write more! Describe people and scenes.

    Check your verb forms.

    I've copied and printed this text to be able to correct it. Look at the corrections and ask if you don't under stand why I've corrected.

    SvaraRadera
  2. Jag är nöjd med detta arbetet därför att jag tycker att det visar att jag har utvecklats i min engelska.

    SvaraRadera
  3. Jag tycker att jag var mer noggrann med grammatiken än vad jag har varit förut.

    SvaraRadera