Hi Sarah! I´ve been waiting for you to write to me. It's good to hear that you are having a good time in London.It's too bad about the traffic. You will get used to it, don't worry. I've never been at the Piccadilly Circus, but i have heard it's great there. I'm really jealous that you are in London. I hope you will get many friends at your new school.If you live close to the sports centre then you should definitely try it out.All your friends back here miss you. We might even come visit you in London, if that's okay with you.
Love,
Jen
Hjalmar: very good job Marcus!
SvaraRaderaA nice letter! Good fluency!
SvaraRaderaTo improve your text you could try to imagine even more things and for example make up news about what has happened to her old friends.
N.B:
All your old friends back here MISS you.
Jag är nöjd med denna för att jag tycker jag har bra engelska i denna.
SvaraRaderaJag tycker att jag gjorde detta arbetet bra och jag försökte inte bli klar så snabbt som möjligt.
SvaraRadera